I find unusual spirits interesting, and I want to hear about the ones you have.

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    11 months ago

    This is the question. “It tastes like the forest: still, slightly sweet air, golden sunlight filtered through emerald leaves, a crystal brook babbling just out of sight” versus “It tastes like the forest. Dirt, rotting undergrowth, and animal shit”.

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      11 months ago

      still, slightly sweet air, golden sunlight filtered through emerald leaves, a crystal brook babbling just out of sight

      Honestly, you should write poetry.

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        11 months ago

        Thank you, that’s very kind! However as you can see, half my work isn’t even worth quoting 😋